Saturday, April 15, 2017

Been thinking of opening lines

Been thinking of opening lines. Something as microcosm beautiful as the dark tower opener.

"The man in black fled across the desert, and the gunslinger followed."

Perhaps,

Once more, the problems end as our solution begins. The steel irising closed behind, as the future returns.


1 comment:

Unknown said...

i like it. it's simple, descriptive yet it doesnt give anything away, and there's immediate action. Roll with it!