Memories, like holes in the bright blackness. Interpretive
visions, made over like sculptor’s clay, gaining impressions with use. To Jupe, to Ere, to Marsh. And the twixts.
There was a time, it’s told. When we had matter for words.
When we had materialization for writing. There was a time, it’s told. When we
had interplay with the seens [sic], the bright flat faces of smile/no smile that herd
us through the Dance. There was a time, when we told it different. That time,
dear ones, is both behind us, and ahead. There will be a time, when we head
where we will, again. Where we would, we will.
There was a time, it’s told. Over some few full Dances ago, way back past when your
grand grand grand grand grand grand grand mother and father far flung and
flying from the stripy Jupe back down through the twixt and to old Ere herself…that
there was a protesting. This was the
protesting which after they took all the writing materialization, bade we
speak only, and record not. That was the banishment of the solid Word, and the beginning
of the times being told only.
There was a time told. When we didn’t just report our
progress to the faceplates, so the next shift knew where we did leave off. When
we could leave solid Word for next crew. Before the next Dance step, 15 years on,
before we’re to pick up home and herd and be pushed into the closest Bell by the cool bright leeds of the
flatfaces, for blast and taken places. Back in the Dance
again for a year and 3, to Ere, to Jupe. Or just the small step of months only from Ere to Marsh. There was a time, it’s told. This was back then. Back when, many more of us wondered from where the Dance started, and the work, and the
building, the stations, and the flatfaces. A grand game of why was played, and the players
penned pals from step to step.
[INTERJECT, you’ve read WOOL yes? seen Snowpiercer? The histories
are made of revolts…. Ever read SAND? And seen that eerie map on the inside cover depicting three cities north to south, Danvar, Sprinston, Low-Pub?]
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Interplanetary_spaceflight#Hohmann_transfers
Got a little patois there with the yarn telling. I admit, I watched CLOUD ATLAS again this weekend. But that's not a bad narrative template perhaps. There's a lot of room in here. A lot of places to fuck up, make mistakes, and get scared to ever try again. Keller has been in a box for a long while. More work done on it lately, than ever. Reminds me of how Baxter recalls a dinner party with Pratchett, where Terry mentions an idea of his hid away without development... infinite Earths, east and west, and a simple machine driven by potato power stepping you from one to the next... and so they decided to develop it, and now later six books of The Long Earth.
So we can do this. If we don't let the experiment get too big, too intimidating. I'm just mortified of making a physics blunder. Committing work and narrative to some glaring error in logistics. Alas, the September in me. We need to hire a physicist for an hour. Pick the brain. See which ideas make them howl.
Let's keep building up the frame work at the same time we build up the window dressing. Deep timbers and sawdust. Sewers and satellites. Search and censor. Belief and ability. Steeped tea and senility. Sudden fortune and sterility.
Who do the flatfaces serve? What are they causing to be built? No doubt the system was dreamed up by humankind. And if it wasn't, if it was thrust upon us by something extra solar, then it would look much different. No, I think we did this to ourselves. Let's dream the structure. And sprinkle the years and miles with human suffering, human hope, human experience.
1 comment:
have still yet to read wool.
Snowpiercer was a cool concept. The train that runs forever and the the revolts are the history. Just what I was thinking about keller. I want to watch it again.
Sand I vaguely remember. Colorado desert brothel?
Yes. Let's sit down with a physicist. I met a young one last year. He's a friend of Gabriel Draper. I'll see what I can do. I'm also afraid of being an idiot who spent a lifetime writing stories based on incorrect info.
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